Whoa, where did this come from?
In comparison to "The Solar Rim" this is good, high quality trance, that I could listen to for a while. It's downtempo and a few of those build-ups could have been saved, but it's good. I really enjoyed this, I think you deserve a good grade on this.
Trance is part production though, and your drums are too far in the back and too weak for this song. The snare is too strong, and the bass is not punchy enough to get through the speakers I am on, and Trance needs bass. Almost a 5 too.