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Nice work.

I liked this, I really did. I don't know what you were going for, but it really is a heck of a lot more ambient than anything else because of the fact there is no kick drum. I find that weird. But regardless, I enjoyed it, so don't let it get you down.

funkyjunky responds:

Thank you, your not wrong I only just noticed that the kick didint seem to get into the midi i used in fruity loops?
Annoyed me a bit, but It doesnt make much of a difference!
Glad you liked this :)
FJ

You must have a pretty progressive church

Dude this seriously is great. But man, if I tried to play this at my church all of them would shun me hard.

itsameyayo responds:

Lol, u serious? Yeah, we're pretty contemporary, but I have another less 8-bit version that has more real instruments, so that would have worked for church. You must have a more traditional church?

-Well cool, I liked your song, and thanks for the review!

-ImperfectDisciple

Sounds really frickin' awesome.

I am really, really happy with the way this ended up turning out. You made my voice sound even better than I thought. You mixed them really well and it's a hell of a lot cleaner than my poorly mixed version.

Thanks for using this, haha, lots of fun.

Rig responds:

Thanks for the vocals, man! They rule, and I got to teach myself about hardcore vocal mixing in the process.
It's just what the song needed :D

Amazing...

Except for your vocals.... not really. They are good, but a few times you went for a lower note and some how you went a little flat, and that happened like twice. Other than that, enjoyable listen and good playing. Nice job with the bass too.

jnry3 responds:

Thanks, man! You're the... *counts*... 7th person to mention that my vocals need work. No worries; pretty aware of it.

Hmm... the lower notes. Yuuuup... did sound off. Will try to tweak it when I get home.

Thanks for the review, five and nine! Really appreciated it! ^_^

Unique feel.

This has a unique feel given you are trying to represent flight with so many toms. Unique, because toms usually are tribal and "heavy" Interesting sounds and nice bass sequence.

jnry3 responds:

Thanks for the review and insight! ^_^

I can still hear my bass in the beginning LOL!

It took me a year to realize this but, my bass is still in there. All this time and I never realized it. Great job with this, I always loved this tune and particularly what was done with it. I never realized that my bass was in there until I listened to the original raw track and then this. Cool.

DarKsidE555 responds:

Nope, it's not. See, I only have the guitars in. Sry to disappoint you there...I don't even know why I didn't put your bass in back then... :/

This kicks all sorts of ass!

Alright dude, I already said a lot to you privately, but! I really enjoy this version, the SFX are really sweet. However, I do wish the bass had more click so it popped out from the guitar a little. Another thing you could try is take a bit of low end of the guitar. ^_^ It's up to you though. I just prefer to have the bass have it's own space and the guitars stay out of it.

DarKsidE555 responds:

I know what you mean man. I try with future submissions...though, be aware that the podxt is not a good for bass recording. I have a bass, yes...but it can never obtain the full power with a guitar based virtual amp.

Anyways, thanks yet again for the kind words! :D

Forgive Me Pandora Tranquil

I don't average my scores, because there are intangibles that make things good or bad. This is way to slow for the style. It's head-bobby, but it's nothing special. No offense to you, I can hear the trance and I could get tranced with this. But as someone else said another 15 BPM would really give it the umph it needs.
As for the effort, you could have gone another 30 seconds of build up.

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

Yea, I suppose I should speed it up, I think I was experimenting with this one because im trying to find the perfect tempo for an actual dance you'd hear at a club (I never do dance music).

But yea, thanks for the constructive criticism

lmao nice review title

Good, but repetative

As others have said, this has a great mood and stuff, but it's way to repetative. Not repetative enough to not be enjoyable though. You are lucky I round up.

kolj responds:

I think a Trancetrack has to be repetative. Most Trance dures 6 minutes or longer.

Everybody thanks for voting a 5/5 =D

Spine Tingly Good.

I do believe this is one of the better short Trance pieces I have ever heard. I love the melodies, the beat and the quotes. It sent shivers up my spine. Good work, I hope to hear some more new stuff.

DjEagle responds:

haha thanks man :)

Covers and Original Music about Video Games, Animation and Life. Hard Rock/Metal with a Progressive edge. Occasional Tutorials on how to play guitar, sing and audio engineering! I also play games!

Connor Pelkey @CyriltheWolf

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Allentown, PA, US

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